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BlueSunset

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Our World

    This was so sweet! Kind of reminded me of the Polar Express movie (if you have watched it?) towards the end.

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: walking on water

    thank you so much for the review! this really helped.

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring's Song

    :D

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: Important Parts

    Great! Glad you find them helpful! :D

    Apr 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thank you for the review. I agree with your points given - this review was helpful!

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    I'm glad you think so!

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thanks a bunch for the review.

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thanks.

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: in the dawn of spring

    Thank you!

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Thanks for your review!

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Ah, thank you!!

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Thank you, thank you, thank you, for this review! It's really going to help me improve and your advice is great. :)

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Interrogation

    No problem! :D

    Feb 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: motionless whiskers.

    Thank you! Yeah - I randomly wrote down lines in no particular order, but it turned out that way and kind of stuck to how it looked. :P

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Script » Science, General Re: What's the matter?

    This is great.

    Nov 26, 2016


The most important thing is to preserve the world we live in. Unless people understand and learn about our world, habitats, and animals, they won't understand that if we don't protect those habitats, we'll eventually destroy ourselves.
— Jack Hanna