BlueDaisy2018

Hey, Cassidytosch! This is a review by BLUEDAISY!!!!!!! Let me just say one thing: Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. WOW! This poem speaks so clearly and so vividly. I could see ...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I am so touched! It makes me want to go out to the Animal Shelter and snatch up all the cute little animals-- and some of the not so ...

THis is my advice to you, kid. Write because you want to. Write because you care about what your story details. Write because you want the reader to feel the ...

Hey!!!!! Much like Rascalover, I cannot find a huge thing I don't like about this piece. The cadence of the beginning is great. One thing I did notice is that ...

Hey herbgirl! I am so happy to be reviewing this for you! I like this poem because it's hopeful even in bad times. It provides a light at the end ...

Hey there again! Your style of writing is so pure and lighthearted that it puts me in a wonderful mood. I want to cuddle up with an InfiniteRectangles poetry book ...

Hullo, love! This is the sweetest little poem I have ever read!!! It takes a clever mind and an open heart to write poetry like this. I have absolutely no ...

Hey! I hope you are having a wonderful day today! THis writing is...wow...and very passionate. I am so sorry about your crap "friends" and your depressed heart, but in and ...

I'll admit it was a hard read. The flow was hard for me follow and the rhythm and grammar just wasn't there. The overall story was goo, but I agree ...

I feel the poem is sweet and light in nature. I generally don't prefer the light, "roses are red" kind of poems. Especially "rose is red, petals on bed". What ...

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Just reminding everyone of the ever important "sandwich"!!!! I'd like to introduce you to the YWS critique sandwich. This is something I noticed YWSers doing some years ago, and I ...

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I really like this, especially the part where you say "a sharp remark on his tongue" and other ways you represent mundane activities in a less than mundane way a.k.a ...

Hey, Mazuurek! To quote thine own self: The long paragraphs might scare some people away. It was hard to get through the whole thing, seeing as it became a majorly ...

I love love love this! I really liked the way I could almost hear the music the boy was playing. I saw colors in the music like red and purple ...

Hey, Pan! This really hits home and I think anyone who has suffered and dealt with it in a harmful way whether it be cutting or depression or attempted suicide... ...