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HEY! Good to see you on YWS!!! Cant wait to read more of your poems (you better put more on)! I remmember doing this haha, good times. I dont actually ...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hey, You'll probably be annoyed at this pointless comment but I'm going to do it anyway. I have noth

Hey, I liked this poem. The ideas were really good and you explained them well. The only thing I disliked was the last line as it kind of just ended ...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wow this is an awesome poem!!! I'm assuming it's lyrics and with a cool tune this poem would be even

Hey, This is a really good poem. I love the way you have depicted the lives of people from a houses perspective. The poem flows really well and you have ...

Hi! This is a sweet poem and like the way you have begun each stanza with Dear god, My only issue is the flow of the poem as sometimes your ...

Hello, Pretty good poem, especially if you haven't written much. I like the idea mainly because it is unique and that provides a special kind of interest for readers. Well ...

I agree with the first two reviews on the point that your poem was a bit 'loose.' In order to captivate readers poems need to include a range of poetic ...

Hello, It was a very sweet poem but at the same time, obviously very sad. I like how you mention 'death.' Often people avoid saying that sort of stuff and ...

Hi-ya :) That's a really interesting idea for a poem and I like it. It's a bit scattered and changes direction to soon sometimes and that destroys the flow which ...

Hi-ya! Good poem but it's just a little simple. My favourite line is actually the heading so great job there. The main thing I would suggest is to try to ...

WOW! Not only do you have a gift but you know how to use it. I expect one day you will be a song-writer and i'll be listening to every ...

WOW! This poem is really awesome. It all seems to fit together and still have meaning. If it were to be a song I could imagine it being Taylor Swift ...

Hey, I love this poem and I reckon that as a song it would be awesome too! I don't really have any suggestions, mainly just appreciation that you wrote it ...

Hello!!! I love your idea for the poem because not only is it original but also interesting. I agree with Elinor Brynn with the point that certain things called be ...