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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: SAH 289

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    I like this! Did you write it??? Honestly if you have any tips for poetry please give me some! "Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape ...

    May 6, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: scream

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    Jeez you made this! This poem is like my life in a nut shell. The only thing I would change is the colors but im just picky. It reminds me ...

    May 3, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Health, Realistic
    Re: Untangled (Chapter 3) 16 recomended

    Hi Anma! Once again I love your stories a lot! Some tips/ feedback -The characters need more distinct personalities and maybe names? They don't seem to be solid characters yet ...

    May 3, 2019

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic
    Re: The stars in their eyes

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    This is super cool. I reminds me of Dear Evan Hansen for some reason. Like the part where Evan Hansen says "We start with stars in our eyes!" Its so ...

    Apr 26, 2019

  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Pain

    This is beautiful! It reminds me of this quote: “I hope to write someday and that’s even more terrifying than performing. You don’t just entertain the audience, you give them ...

    Apr 19, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter One

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    “Here’s to the crazy ones, the misfits, the rebels, the troublemakers, the round pegs in the square holes… the ones who see things differently — they’re not fond of rules… ...

    Apr 17, 2019

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Mad Never Crazy - Short story

    “Here’s to the crazy ones, the misfits, the rebels, the troublemakers, the round pegs in the square holes… the ones who see things differently — they’re not fond of rules… ...

    Apr 17, 2019

  • Art » Spiritual, Realistic
    Re: Eyes

    Okay 1 this is super creative good job! You should try to add more realism to the eyes. The idea of adding the eyes to a coloring sheet is good ...

    Apr 17, 2019


  • This is good maybe add some more context into the plot line. Like how did they survive? But Peter is Super cute and Loki is as hot as ever and ...

    Apr 17, 2019


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