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Re: The Siege, Chapter one:No chance to succeed
Your chapter isn't particularly long for a book as you say. Sometimes people like t post them in shorter parts because reviewers often don't like reviewing so much in one ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 4.6
I started writing a review for this ages ago... then forgot I'd started it. Unluckily it wasn't saved in drafts, so I have to start again. I began something along ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 4.5
Well, I started reading this out of interest, and it's convenient that the final one I arrived at still had a spot for a green room review. I was very ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Covered with Dust
Ello, you asked me to be harsh. You don't know who you are asking to be harsh. I will show you no mercy. Frankly, your structure is all over the ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: 01-Tradition's Sake
Great work here. I wouldn't have guessed English was your second language from reading that. It was a long read, so everything I thought about reviewing along the way I ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: .
What I see here is another cynical opinion of valentines day that seems to be trending, which I think does add an extra (desirable or undesirable) context to poetry such ...
Feb 22, 2014 -
Re: The Consequences of Owning a Terrible Sweater
Hello there, you get the first review I have written in a while, so lets get cracking. Firstly, be very careful with your tenses. In the first paragraph you established ...
Feb 22, 2014 -
Re: The Curious Romances of Edmund Sullivan
Great story. I really like what you have done here. The title is what draws the reader in, and then they leave it with the nice little twist. I like ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: As Part of The Love Club
'The Love Club', written by ShadowWings, published on the website of on December 30, 2013, was a piece of poetry in which I thought could use some work. Although the ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Prologue
Nice description to begin with. Your second word has a typo. It should be pairs not pair. The moon was a silver, divine plate above everything, seemingly giving the beast ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: 'Dirty. Junk. Trash.'
You actually wrote this XD what should have I expected? Anyway, I have a few things to criticise on your interviewing skills. First thing first, there is absolutely not structure ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: I need to kill.
Well Misha... what's gotten into you? This seems quite savage from your normal attitude. I am going to be slightly harsh on you, since I know you, and frankly, I ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Bipolar
Seems like you have held back on your punctuation buddy, and you would do good to have it in there. You begin to add it in some places near the ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Chalk Circles - 1
Marvellous piece you have here. I am very impressed. It was a compelling read which drew me in from the start, although the ending of this chapter was what really ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Flickering
Salutations. Great piece you have here and I have a few things to say about it. To be honest you had a bit of a rough start, and I'll point ...
Nov 25, 2013
