Blackwood

i REALLY LIKE THIS. the RHYMING WORKS IN ALMOST EVERY PLACE EXCEPT FOR AT THE BEGINNING. IN THIS STANZA. Pain is not something I regret, Hurt is not something I ...

Why did you post the same thing twice You just said this was not part of a novel but then you have the whole novel right there. You don't make ...

Dude Centuries and centuries ago, lived an ancient society called the ‘Mashk Collicters’. This doesn't make sense at all. centuries and centuries what lived I read it three times then ...

The words in this are excellent. They capture a cetrain sophisticated insanity in which I love. You fold them all nicely together and you use them in just the right ...

I really like this. I am not familiar with the style and had a bad experience with reviews this one time in which I was very embarrassed. The whole thing ...

I am not sure what type of style this is.... You're writing in a very blatant fashion at the beginning, like a child, saying Cynthia this, Cynthia that with short ...

So schizophrenic The idea is burnt The time is now stretching A crash back to Earth I love the lines in this opening stanza. They are very poetic and work ...

Ok first thing first is that i think you should divide your poem into set stanzas. this makes it easier to read and gives it a sense of structure. Stanzas ...

So another poem on writers block? I love the irony of these. Often they do reflect what you are going through at the time as I can feel the forcefulness ...

I love the opening sentence. It hooked me right away because personally I love dreams and I love being able to live in this alternate world with it's own struggles ...

This is well done. I am confused at the line about people adoring scars. What does this justify? What does it mean? You need to place your words with more ...

Ok I have seen so many poems on this site saying something about "I tried" and it gets to the point where it is overused and bears not meaning, especially ...

You really set yourself up for something in thedescription. Even decorating your story in an idolistoc mannaer. I must admit I have big expectation for this after what you have ...

What exactly are you confused about? I particularly like the line "my tears are too dry". This tells me that the narrator does not cry even though they think they ...

I love this poem and the wild woman behind the wheel. At the beginning I didn't like the bracketed bit about the sign. I think it's uneccersary and rather diverts ...