Bjorn

Thank-you, thank-you very much! And yes, I believe I do mean portent ^_~

Oh, well, this is a surprise ^^ Thank you very much, Iluvialover!

Thanks! There, I edited it last night. Any new suggestions?

Ah, thank you, both of you! I wasn't sure about the pillars/briars myself. I thought maybe I could get away with it, we'll see (though I suppose I didn't ^_~). ...

Hey! Thanks alot. In fact, that was the same problem my writing teacher had with it ^^;; I'm going to have to revise that. Thanks again!

Morskigrad In Morskigrad by the sea, City fair by azure waters, Where once dwelt a happy sea-folk free, Amidst its gleaming white towers: There is a great, doleful building Of ...

Thank-you! And welcome to the site! And here is a rarity: a Slav from the Motherland! (Well, besides our good friend Zion/Arvandor, and anyone else I don't know).

Ah! Thank-you all! And here I thought all it's being praised for would have contributed to its negative criticism. - Suzanne, mein kleine Poljakina: I like your interpretation of it. ...

Why thank you Azila. We are all entitled to our opinions, and yours is no less significant than anyone elses. Thanks ^^

No consequence at all, it seems! ;)

Sorry for the italics, I have a thing where I italicize all my poems that I post. And thank you both for your honest critiques. I knew very well it ...

Ahaha! My my, was I really like that back then? I assure you worthy fellows of YWS I've removed myself from the Christian yoke, and have matured greatly since that ...

I see no reason to expand this, I feel it gives the message quite clearly - there shall always be war, in one form or another. And its outcome is ...

Why thank-you!

Haha, thank you!