Bittersweet

Wow. That's a little... eerie. I like it a lot though (it just kind of creeps me out). Just Serenade me in my sleep Serenade doesn't need to be capitalized. ...

Wowza. This is wonderful. It's so good because I know you really felt this while writing it. Why do we run and hide? Sometimes I just wish everyone could know ...

Hello again! Okay, well I've noticed that you definitely have the potential to be a really great poet. You have a certain... cleverness is the word I want to say, ...

Hey there! -waves- I find this poem reasonably good. The thing that bugs me is that it kind of confusing. My one crooked finger Okay, is he like Cap'n Hook ...

#1 Biggest Fan, here! :D Well, I must say, I quite enjoyed this piece--first of all, because I relate to Raymond, with his musical-ness. I play the piano as well, ...

Hullo there! Er, I didn't really read all of the other reviews, so if I repeat something they say, sorry. The smell of screams. The smell of dying men and ...

HAHAHAHA! Nice! I can't really review this, but I can say it made me laugh. Especially the bard. He's my favorite. You many have already seen this video on YouTube, ...

Eeeh! I have to know who that guy is now! Anywhoo, you've definitely created a nice prologue. I always believe that a prologue should be at least one of these, ...

GAH! Stupid mother!!! -feels like slapping Fat Boy's mom- She's such a jerkface! Okay, now I feel absolutely horrible for Fat Boy. The poor kid has too much pain for ...

Awe... I feel so terrible for him. The mom! She's so... she's such a jerk! Grrrr! Poor Fat Boy... Anywhoo, of all of previous entries, this is my favorite. You ...

Well, how could I not leave a comment when Fat Boy is begging me to? I really really like your style. It's so... well, I relate to it. I'm not ...

Wow. This is really good! I really like the personality in it. You know exactly how he feels and your heart goes out to him. Sorry, I'm kind of in ...

Hey, [aka] eliza! Welcome! This is a nice piece of writing. A bit short, a bit blunt, but I like it. Probably because I can totally relate to the character. ...

Hello, I must say I liked this poem. It may have helped a little to have read your story first, but I do like the fantasy prospect. It gets a ...

Nice nice nice! This was an excellent poem. Your words are beautiful and (oh, this sounds cheesy, but) magical. They weave together nicely, and create lovely pictures in the reader's ...