BitterRosemary

Good point, didn't realize you were focusing on the innocence. :) have a good morning

ahhh that makes more sense :) i just read it wrong then :)

ahhh that makes more sense :) i just read it wrong then :)

I'm not exactly sure why but I love love love this. Great jobs, sent chills up my spine. Very gripping, grabs readers right from the start. Good work Gravity! ~BitterRosemary

Well I WAS going to review this but I suppose you've already stated everything that I had to say :) Whovians forever!

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSS Hey BitterRosemary here for a review!! Let's get started. As you can see above, I really like this poem. It's a unique & strong concept, well conveyed and ...

Thanx. :)

Thanx so much! Thanx for understanding the off rhyme- scheme. Lots of people don't. I agree, it adds a certain flare :) ~Bitter

I have a hole in my soul was capitalized because the narrator (yes, it is based on my personal experience) is shouting this phrase, but nobody can hear her. Yes ...

sorry I did reformat this to put a a tab before line 4 instead of line 3, but my devil computer auto corrected it. sorry :(

Lol what does it say about our culture that "vampire" = killing, burning in the sun, and sparkling. Twillight much? No offense, each to his own, I suppose. :) But ...

The, and the love interest is male.

This is a response to Elle's review because for some reason, my computer wont post the reply in the response area. Hi Elle thanx for the honest review!! the 5th ...

Thanx so much that means alot! ~Bitter

Thanxx for the review, but I just wanted to note, this poem isn't meant to be sardonic at all. but thanx otherwise!!