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Re: The Veil - Chapter 16 Part 3
Hi-yo! So let me start off with saying, good job!!! I think you did really well on this piece and I like it very much. While I haven't read any ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: The Tale of a Charmander (A Pokemon Story) Chapter 2; Blast Castle
Hello! Billie Jean here reporting for review duty!!! (okay that sounded super dorky) Okay so I really, really like this story-it's just so cute and adorable! I used to play ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: Other Side of The Ocean -Chapter 2 [Edited]
Okay Happy September Review Day!!! So let me start out with staying good job! I think you did very well with this piece and I really like it. There is ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 8: Truth or Lie (part one)
Hello! Billie here, Happy September Review Day!!! Okay so first off, good job! I think you did really well on this piece and I personally really like it. There only ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Salamnder Wings: Chapter 4: How to foreget future events
Hi! Happy September Review Day! - Billie here Okay so I really, really love this story. Your attention to detail and emotion is really epic. I love reading stories that ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Dreampeople, Part 1, Chapter 2
Hello! Happy September Review Day!!! BillieJean here. Okay so I'm going to start off with saying I think you did a really good job with this piece. There is a ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Face of a Borg Chapter 3
Hi! Happy September Review Day!!! Okay so I'm going to start by saying, good job!!!! So I positively love this. I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! There is ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Secret Service section #9
Hi! Billie Jean here!!! Happy September Review Day!!! So since I haven't read in of your previous chapters or sections I'm just going to go on like I normally do ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: A Twins Hunt - A Blood Ceremony (Chapter Three)
Hi! Okay so I think this was really good and I really liked it! Also, like Sherri said it reminds me of the Black Butler as well. (I don't know ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season Two: Episode 24, Burned Into Memory
Hi! Happy September Review Day! So, first off I'm going to star with saying good job! Okay, so I think you did a really good job with this and I ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 7
Hi! Happy September Review Day!!!! This is BillieJean here!! Okay, so before I begin my review I just want to say, GOOD JOB!!! First off, I'm going to go over ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: [Halberd] Ruby File (2) Jealousy (scrapped)
Hi! I'm just going to start out with saying good job! I think you did really well on this piece. There are a few things that are really good but ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: This Hunger Lingers Here - Chapter Two (Part One)
Hi!! So first off I'm going to say good job! Okay so I think you did a really good job on how your content and structure correlate. Furthermore, I also ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 15
Hi Megsug, great job on the story!!! So, I haven't yet read the other chapters because I'm just going through the Green Room. Despite this I will still try to ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Unsilenced War-Chapter 2
Hi! BillieJean here!!! So I'll start off with saying you did a wonderful job! You have excellent structure and content and they blend very well together. You also transitioned very ...
Sep 28, 2014