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Re: Keeping Time
(shouldn't this be rated R? It has the 'f' word.) I will critique this soon! But I have to go. Byyye! -Jared
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
Holy cow. I have no idea how you found this -- It was abandoned long ago. But I finished it... and it was a piece of crap. But thanks? The ...
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Edited! Thank you guys so much! -Jared
Jul 21, 2008 -
Re: IT part 1
Hello! Welcome to YWS! It's a rule here that we don't post one of our stories until we have at least reviewed two things. Please do that and then you ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: Daemon
I'm not entirely sure why BigBadBear said the piece's meter was perfect, because I didn't hear any... I don't generally use any particular meter, I can't... it's just not how ...
Jul 20, 2008 -
Re: KABOOM!
This is a very happy piece. I really like it. It's very different, unique and all around very nice. I can't really critique it because it's just noises... but hey... ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Murder & Investigation #1 - Before the Murder
Whoa. I woke up and had eight responses. That's the most I've ever woken up to! Ryukun7 - Thanks! I'll go back and edit those two parts, because they seem ...
Jun 28, 2008 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
I don't understand why you are all against him. Name 5 specific things that he plagiarized and from what book/movie.
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Has anyone read 'The Book Thief' by : Markus Zusak?
I've read the first 50 pages. The little sign things that are like this: ******DESCRIPTION OF GIRL*********** Really bug me. I don't understand them. I guess it's just the author's ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: The Séance
Thank you all so much for your help! This is all edited and pretty good so far. Again, thanks. I believe the sequel will be named The Ouija Board . ...
Jun 7, 2008 -
Re: Foreverdark
This is REALLY long. Nobody is gonna read it unless you break it up. I would suggest posting just the prologue today. And then some other time post Year 1. ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 5 (Part Two)
Hey, thanks a lot! Haha, yeah I try to throw some humor in with all of the serious issues that Fatty goes through. It makes it (I think) easier to ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 5 (Part One)
Wow, JFW, thank you so much! I always miss those things that you talk about. I used to go dash crazy, but now I've gone comma crazy... Anyway, yeah, the ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Cain Part One
O.o Thanks.
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Cain Part One
PS: Whoah - this is seriously you, Jared? Shocked No offense, but I like Fat Boy better. This is a completely different style - I didn't even remember it was ...
May 19, 2008