IT part 1

I looked at Annie with intense love. she knew what i was, what i had inside me,but she did not run. i looked at her long brown hair and soft complexoin. her olive green eyes stared intently into mine.

"Please, let me help you." she said, with the usual determined tone. Just then i felt the, the thing rise up inside me.

"Annie" i managed to gasp. "Run!" but it was to late. I felt it take control. i literaly felt my features twist and distorate. i cuaght sight of myself in the mirror in Annies living room.

my usual boy-ish charm was gone. I had a wicked leer and my eyes had turned red. my Short brown hair did not hide the veins sticking out of my neck. my fingernails had somehow grown longer and sharper. and i had that look in my eyes. the look of murder.

"Bryce, I know your in there, please fight it!" Annie begged as she hurredly backed away while i advanced. i tried to tell her i couldent. i couldent fight it becuase it was too stron whatever it was.

I picked up one of Annies kitchen knifes from the counter (We were now in the kitchen) NOOOOO! i was silently screaming but the creature paid no attention to my cries of agony.

"She mine now"I heard it think, inside MY head! Annie was now against the wall and i knew, without a doubt, that i would murder my true love.

Then there was a knock on the door. i dotn really know why but all of a sudden the mailman barged in. then it attacked. he pushed Mr. Antonio (What the mailman liked to be called) To the ground.

i Then did something i never thought i would do... i killed.

i took the long knife and sank it into antonios chest. his eyes bulged with fear and pain. then he looked down on the knife sticking out of his chest with an incredulous look on his face. And then... he died.

It, or rather I, chuckled darkley. Until I turned around and saw Annie with another knife in her hands. "Get out Bryce"! she screamed, with her usual determination. My hand crept up and grabbed the knife out of antonios chest.

Inside i was horrified. I wanted out but the horrible creature had a home inside me and wouldent let me go.

"You kill me you kill your lover as well". I, or rather it, chuckled. i saw Annies hand drop a fraction and so did, to my dismay, the creature. Thats when he attacked and when i had to fight back, or lose the love of my life.

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Bro333 Comment

sorry i did now and people i only did this one for fun and it was late at night so i know it sucks. give me a break i was tired.

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