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Re: Run
1nspire, Ha!! This is brilliant! I love the twist at the end. It was surprising and made me actually laugh out loud! You had built up some suspense to the ...
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: 41.6309° N, 87.7707° W
Storybrainiac, Hello there! I enjoyed reading this today and I wanted to say a few things out to maybe help you out on not only improving this poem/story but also ...
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: Botched Sayings and Formalities
Liminality, I enjoyed reading this because, as the reviewer before me mentioned, I had to read it twice to understand what I was reading. As far as content, I feel ...
Aug 8, 2018 -
Re: Mr Harry Potter, sir
Your cool ginger friendand the girl so nerdystayed with you til the end(sorry about your birdie!) Haha, that part made me laugh. It's kind of a pointless poem, but it ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Offended People Offend Me!!!
It offends me when people call me a dimwit. This needs to be in your blog. Not on the forums. If you want your blog to get more traffic, don't ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Listen carefully.
I won't lie. This is one of the most solid pieces of flash fiction I've ever read. I absolutely love the way you have made this stream-of-consciousness effect work in ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: For Those Who Fall In Love Easy
So, I haven't reviewed in like a thousand years, but I just thought I'd mention this because no one else has: Not a sin not a curse from what I ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: An Old Chess Set
This was really, really interesting. I absolutely love how you used the concept of a chess game to make something so interesting and query based. It's really well written and ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Two Weeks Notice 2.3 (Final Scene)
Haha! This is just the way it had to end, wasn't it? I'm glad he died--I would've been pissed if he had just fallen in love and found a new ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: bridging
Kylan, It's been a while since I've read your poetry. And man, do I miss it. To be completely honest, I don't know how to critique this. Your poetry has ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Two Weeks Notice 2.1
Flemzo, I liked this a lot. I'm not sure if I liked it as much as the other couple parts, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. A few things: If this ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
thatoddkid, Hey! So, I was drew in by your title, which I think is really clever. I really like the way you write. It has just the right amount of ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter One (1)
Okay, I don't read a whole lot of novels on here, but the instant I saw your title, I was drawn in. You're a really fantastic writer, you really are. ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
The one thing that I found fault with, is that it was a bit too short. Also I don't have a twitter, but if you do, can you comment on ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (Twitterized)
HARRY_P Holy shit. I’m a wizard. 1 Jul _____ That was the best tweet out of all of them. This is really funny, and incredibly pointless, but really funny, so ...
Jul 29, 2011
