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It's about time I get tho this. :) Hundreds of sharp spires rose from the depths, some in uneven pairs or trios, some with terraces providing security from the yawning ...

Hi, Master_Yoda, I've actually been meaning to review this work for a long, long time but never got around to doing it until now. ^^ I haven't read the other ...

Hi, playerj09, here's your review as requested. The Streets of New York were flooded with the bodies of Millions of former inhabitants. "streets" and "millions" should not be capitalized. The ...

Hi, ButterFlyInk, here's your review as requested. The moon was sheltered by thick misty clouds, which threatened a thunderstorm. Not a good idea to start the story off with passive ...

All right, first things first... Your paragraphs are massive. Especially on the computer, it's a headache to read; I'm sure they can be split up at portions to make it ...

I feel terrible about this, but... This was just so good, I couldn't find anything to really critique. What I really love about these stories is that they're all so ...

A few little things first-- Marcie turned to the screen next to her desk. One of her stiletto heels tapped against the makeup artist’s arm and Marcie pulled back as ...

Hello, foxfire, I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned that I do get very nitpicky and will point out things that bother me even if I don't have any ...

Here goes the nitpick machine. ^^ *cough trying to distract myself from writers block cough* Merlin lifted his head and stared at the sight before him "Stared" doesn't seem right ...

Here's my review. :) It'll be a little less nitpicky than the previous one because I think I took care of most of the nitpicks there. As soon as I ...

Hi, Conrad, I'll be your reviewer for today. Prepare for a lot of nitpicking! The twisted shapes of the wooden animals looked different beneath the moonlight. Maybe it's just me, ...

Hi minimac, I'll be your reviewer for today. Prepare for lots of nitpicking.... :D The white gates in front of Maeve stood menacingly, supposedly inviting her in. Ack, you're using ...

I'll be your reviewer for today. Be warned I can get rather...nitpicky... I'm not intending to be harsh, though; just trying to help you be the best writer you can ...

It's me again, back with more nitpicking. :) Promise I won't be too harsh, though. The summons from the Kalagat came in the middle of the morning, sun peeking from ...

Hi Esme, I'm going to be reviewing this. :) Be warned I do get rather...nitpicky...and I'm feeling incredibly tired this morning, which is not helping my mood, but I promise ...