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^^ Two guys actually polinkacreations :P And as per usually someone else has beaten me to the puch line. I'm going to save your time a little bit here Smile, ...

Hey there, I must say that these are really short but sometimes less is more, right. I understand not wanting to waste 100 points for just one 3-4 line poem. ...

Hola, (upside down ?) que tal? God, I'm so tempted to do my review entirely in Spanish, and given I'm taking GCSE spanish Ireally should understand more of your spanish ...

Not often that I come across a haiku that I realy like. Well done on that front. You've managed to fit the taditional 5,7,5 syalablle ( :? ) layout of ...

Hello again, lets see what you've written this time shall we? I like how you've swapped to a different character to get a different perspective on whats going on, although ...

I appologise in addvance: I only rad half of it, it all fairness though my laptop will start to die soon... I've enjoyed it thourghly so far though. I like ...

Quite true. I think that this what everyone goes through at somepoint in their life. I love the ending by the way, because no matter which we choose we always ...

Super 8, a film directed by J.J. Abrams and produced by Steven Spielberg. It's a film that revisits, what I think is, a dying genre. A group of kid going ...

I was intrigued by this, unfortunately however, I have to agree with ItIsLove on the fact that it is way too short. I think that it would more as a ...

Well the rhyming is a bit off... No, joke! Please don't hate me! I love the way this peice flows, the fact some of it rhymes but dosen't have to ...

I really enjoyed reading this and I have a soft spot for happy/sad endings. Personally I think that this feels as if it's a little under written, as if you've ...

Quickly reading through it, it is a very emotional piece that can speak out to just about anybody who reads it. However re-reading a couple of times after more carefully, ...

This is the second thing of your's that I've read and I seem to the get the feeling that you really can write sad and touching thing with a great ...

Truley fantastic, in my opinion anyway. I only wish that I could actually hear it being sung. I think that it will really speak to alot of young girls, especially ...

I agree mostly with the previous statment, the fact that rhythming is a little off in places and the similes/metaphors can be improved upon. I think that you try to ...