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Re: Just Look.
Hiya there, review time! I think I'll take this stanza by stanza, but it's also absolutely fab - so thank you for writing it. The first stanza drew me in ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: do the waves make a noise when no one is listening
I don't fully know why, but I quite like this. I understand the title correlates with the poem and it's meaning of answers that many ponder, yet still know the ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Delivering The Words of The Great One
I really do like how this is written; the flow and the constant theme is good. The only things Ive noticed are that in the second line, 'a prayer for ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Raindrops
I quite liked it, to be honest. Although it was a little random, I liked how you managed to write the raindrops as people and towns; and how them 'sighing' ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: I, am not a food can
Wow. Just wow. I really love what you wrote; it was so amazing and so true in so many senses of what has been written. I love how you wrote ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Miranda (Part 1)
Just wow. I walked into this not really sure; a piece titled with just a name always makes me wary, but I am really happy I read this. I think ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Unfair
I really quite like this; how there aren't any capital letters and how it's shown so simply. I don't know if you meant to make it mean this; but It ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully
Okay, so I can very easily say that this is amazing. The final sentence was like a bullet of 'oh Lord, what?' I really do love how this is written; ...
Dec 9, 2013
