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BethanyMarieWright

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just Look.

    Hiya there, review time! I think I'll take this stanza by stanza, but it's also absolutely fab - so thank you for writing it. The first stanza drew me in ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: do the waves make a noise when no one is listening

    I don't fully know why, but I quite like this. I understand the title correlates with the poem and it's meaning of answers that many ponder, yet still know the ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Delivering The Words of The Great One

    I really do like how this is written; the flow and the constant theme is good. The only things Ive noticed are that in the second line, 'a prayer for ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Raindrops

    I quite liked it, to be honest. Although it was a little random, I liked how you managed to write the raindrops as people and towns; and how them 'sighing' ...

    Dec 10, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I, am not a food can

    Wow. Just wow. I really love what you wrote; it was so amazing and so true in so many senses of what has been written. I love how you wrote ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Miranda (Part 1)

    Just wow. I walked into this not really sure; a piece titled with just a name always makes me wary, but I am really happy I read this. I think ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Unfair

    I really quite like this; how there aren't any capital letters and how it's shown so simply. I don't know if you meant to make it mean this; but It ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully

    Okay, so I can very easily say that this is amazing. The final sentence was like a bullet of 'oh Lord, what?' I really do love how this is written; ...

    Dec 9, 2013


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