BenFranks

You make some points here that I would definitely agree with, especially your main point that to write you need to have read or are reading. Although I would argue ...

Hey there, I tell you what I love about you're story: it feels real. I find myself trying to critique, but I'm having second thoughts. When I read this, there's ...

Hey there, - as requested - So I really liked this poem because of the visualisations, the structure and the fluency. Usually I'd punctually rip poetry a part, but you're ...

Hey there Elinor! Here as requested. Review: However , as she lay there, she found herself not being able to drift back into sleep. This feels a little too formal ...

Hey there. Just being a little picky, but this line could do with an extra syllable: to the days when we would whisper in the decaying light Perhaps alter the ...

Hey there, The reviewers above me are right about repetition. The structure of this poem merely feels like you've taken a question, decided you're going to ask the same thing, ...

Hey there, I must say that I liked this poem. There is a pretty good balance in terms of punctuation so there's no forced, choppy pace and nor is there ...

72. Visit England . . . 73. . . . and France . . . 74. . . . and Italy . . . 75. . . . and Ireland ...

Hullo there! My first thoughts of this piece is that this is definitely one of those influential tales that are invaluable to stumble across. I don't play American football myself, ...

Hey there! Right, firstly, this is quite good in terms of narrative winds and snaps of visualisation thanks to a dandy set of word choicing. However, at the start, the ...

Fimbling fingers turning sideways in their clumsy confusion- handholding really wasn’t so difficult, but I knew that you were flustered-blustered, red-faced and cute with embarrassed words , words,

Hi there Emmy, I have to say before we start that you have a real talent for imagery and word choice. This is one of those poems that is a ...

Hi there, here as you requested. Just a few nitpicks to get started: shouting to from him inside the hollow I believe you meant to write: "shouting to him from ...

Hey there! I have to say, as a Beatles fan, that this story interested me from the word go. It's short and you create a good character base and develop ...

Hey there. First thing I thought when I read this piece was that it started off quite well. You had the subtle descriptions and the senses of overwhelming beauty portrayed ...