BenFranks

Hey Flower, here as you requested. I'll do my usual do-dar and offer any comments/suggestions and improvements in a specially picked colour. I think I'll go with a blue today! ...

Hey Elinor! My favourite thing about your poem is the fluency and flow of each line. They blend quite well and despite the absence of grammar, the poem does have ...

Hey there! First and foremost, I think the language you've chosen in this has very good effect. It crafts some particularly vivid imagery in the first stanza. I therefore praise ...

Hey there! You have some good ideas coming across in your poem, as you've definitely conveyed a personal response to the subject of the piece of poetry. However, there are ...

Hello there! The structure of this poem is very defined in the sense of the repetition of "We", which to some readers, may seem like an off-put. However it also ...

Hey there Flower! I was going to quote this and give you a full length critique, but reading it I think it's truly brilliant. Hence the fact I have no ...

Hey there. The first paragraph of your report is beautifully well written and sets the bar for what I expect the rest of your work to be pretty high. That's ...

Hello Kay. Unlike the other reviewer, I think the emotion is the strong point here. I believe you've implied it quite well by showing your confused emotions, the repetition of ...

Hey there! First of all, I love this piece. I've always had a passion for everything historic and I think you've brought some key things to light when discussing a ...

Hey there! Right, I'll begin with the nitpicks and see if we can refine your technical accuracy a notch! :wink: I woke up with my eyes still too sluggish to ...

Hey there Kay! I love the dialogue of this, and it's kind of a vulnerable side to Riley and I really like that! What I will mention is perhaps refrain ...

Hey there :wink: Intriguing title! Come meet me where the sun shines. where we greet the new day. One filled with so many possibilities. The sun's rays extend to infinite. ...

You've done it! You've cracked the Tales , Woo-hoo! High-five n' all that dabble. I rarely see a Non-Fiction anecdote/tale post that's written as beautifully as this. It is styled ...

Okay, the others have commented on it too much like it's a piece of prose. I think what you're doing is kind of half slipping between a relatively dull anecdote ...

Essentially, though, you're always going to have popularity whether the school system is based in the 19th century or not. At the end of the day, you're still a human ...