Bellator

Hey, come on. I get that you didn't really like it, and that's fine, but there's no need to make fun of someone's faith like that. Religion and logic aren't ...

Thanks for reviewing! I get what you mean about using figurative language instead of just writing out her emotions. I have a tendency to 'tell' and not 'show.''They' is supposed ...

Both, actually. This girl is afraid to help others.

Thanks for the feedback! The line 'Carefully hid' is a bit short, I admit, but I couldn't add anything else without disrupting the rhythm.

This wasn't meant to be a full-blown poem. I just put it under poetry because I didn't know where else it would fit. Sorry if I disappointed anyone! :(

Thanks!

Woah, you're in the literary spotlight! Congratulations!

I'm glad you liked it! I've thought about continuing it, but I couldn't think of a good plot.

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Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to clear that up in future pieces.

Actually, it was based on a couple of prompts from my writing class. Thanks so much for the feedback! :)

No problem! :)

Thanks for the review! I admit I have a bit of a problem with paragraphs in my writing. I just couldn't figure out where to break it up!

Wow, I'm flattered! Thanks for reviewing!

Thanks! I'll try to fix those things you mentioned.