Bellator

Thank you for reviewing! Yeah, I noticed that the piano thing was a little abrupt. I'll try to fix that.

Nothing like this has ever happened to me. I just decided to write in second person :) Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! The way I keep my rhythm is by thinking of the general gist of what I want to say in each line, and then figuring out ...

Thank you! :)

No problem! :)

Hi! Here to review. Wow, this is really good! Your rhymes are pretty effortless, which is hard to do. I love your opening line. Most of this has a nice ...

Hello! Thank you for your review. I really appreciate the feedback. However, the intent of the poem wasn't really any sort of serious social commentary. I just had an idea ...

Thank you! :)

Yeah, that was on purpose :) What do you mean by 'Type it out properly'?

Hey there! I really enjoyed this. I like how you managed to convey romance while being succinct. Even though it is so short, I got a sense of the narrator's ...

Alrighty. I'll get right on that (eventually)

Holy sugar plums. Thanks so much for all the likes! :D

Hey, thanks for the review! About your suggestion, if I change 'fool' to 'fools' then I would have to change 'genius' to 'geniuses', and that's an extra syllable. I admit ...

Thanks for the feedback! Yep, I'm American. This poem would be kind of rude if I wasn't. :)

This is really sweet, and it addresses a rarely spoken about aspect of suicide. I'm glad that things like this and people like you exist to show other people what's ...