Bellator

Hello! Bella here for a review! I really liked this. A bit confusing, but an interesting concept. In fact, you've given me a great idea for a story! However, the ...

Hello, Bella here for a review! Wow, the message of this is really deep. I like the concept of three hundred and sixty four days and just one left. It ...

I enjoyed this. There's something pleasing about your writing style that I just can't put my finger on... Anyway, I agree with dragonofpheonix in saying that the haircut scene is ...

Holy mother of pancakes, this is good. I don't play piano, but if i did, i would want it to feel like this. Not many people can describe music as ...

Hey! Bella here. I really enjoyed this. It was funny and scary and thought-provoking, which is very hard to achieve such a short piece. I agree with timmyjake in saying ...

This is a really touching story. I love how Rosalie notices the subtle changes in Sean's behavior, like how he doesn't turn away from the television when he's talking to ...

I really liked this. The story fits in well with the lyrics (at least I assume they're lyrics) and the atmosphere is really cool. Never having experienced something like this, ...

Hello! Bella here to review! You've got a nice start here. I wasn't particularly excited, however. I feel like everything happened too quickly. Maybe you could give us some of ...

Wow, I'm intrigued! I love all of the metaphors and hidden meanings, and the almost dreamlike quality you've established here. The nice word choice really adds to the macabre, slightly ...

Wow! This brought tears to my eyes! I thought that you used some really nice language here. I especially liked "He stood there as the rain picked up, hammering down ...

Hello! Bellator here as requested! I thought this was a very well thought out article. Your ideas are relevant and logical. I don't normally review articles, but this was really ...

Hey! First off, I think this is a really god idea. However, I was confused on the "Young Jesben" part. I think you should make it more clear that she ...

Hello! First off, I love this idea. A huge diamond city full of mystery and a headstrong girl trying to figure it out! Also, the interesting vocabulary you used, such ...

Hello! It's Bella again. First off, I thought the description was very nice. I loved, "I didn't see his hand coming toward my face until I was knocked into the ...

This was really well-written! It captures real-life reactions very well. Ruth's experiences seem very real. Also, Ruth is a character that I can relate to. She seems like the type ...