Bellator

Wow. This was extremely touching. You did a fantastic job of capturing Jesus and what he would say. I'm Catholic, but whenever I try to imagine a Jesus-and-me conversation, it ...

Hello! Bella here. First off, I really enjoyed this. I liked the way you described the setting. I could really picture it in my mind. Also, I thought it was ...

I enjoyed this, but like some of the fine people below me, I was a bit confused. I liked the lines "why can't nothing be nothing?" "don't brag about depression' ...

I really love this. It shows that love isn't always perfect, and that even though it cannot be confined to one shape, it is still true. I can kind of ...

Hello! First off, I love how you based this off of a music video. I've seen this video plenty of times, but never thought to base a story off of ...

DON'T LIE TO ME SUSHI. YOU ARE NOT DREADFUL AWFUL AT POETRY. I really quite enjoyed this! I like the scattered the scattered rhyme scheme you have going. Also, I ...

Wow, I never knew you could write poetry! This is really good! I absolutely adore the first line. My only complaint would probably be the second line. Watching a scary ...

Oh my, this is beautiful. I was there with her. I felt her brief happiness, her sadness, her longing. I feel like I know her, which is quite an accomplishment ...

This really, really fantastic. I love how you bury complex themes into simple descriptions, and serious topics in almost childlike thoughts. I particularly loved, "Perhaps there were other patients aw

I thoroughly enjoyed this. It packed a punch, which is especially nice in such a short work. It reminds me of a snippet of a private thought, one that many ...

Hello! Bella here. I really enjoyed this. You have a certain way with words that makes me just want read this aloud in a British accent while stealing millions of ...

Hey! Bellator here for a review. I really loved this! I liked how you mixed sophisticated language with a dark theme. It's hard to rhyme, so I really appreciate how ...

Hello, here for a review. I really liked this. It's got a sort of twisted charm to it, if you know what I'm saying. I like how one assumes that ...

Well. This was an interesting story. I liked the bluntness, but at the same time, it just seemed like you were in a hurry. Take time, explain things. Also, give ...

Hello! I really liked the way you used the moon as a character. That's pretty unique, and I haven't seen it done often before. Also, I liked how when she ...