BellaRoma

Can I just say, this was pretty clever. By using Frey's POV and talking about him and Adrian you have made sure we're still thinking about him as much as ...

This is pretty interesting. I like the storyline of Sharon being forgotten by everybody because it has the potential to be fantasy-like with some sort of magic spell but it ...

Hello Don. Here to review as promised. I'm glad I'm not the only one who asks for reviews... Right, onto the review now. I thought that the poem was worded ...

Hey Timmy. So, I thought I'd come and review this. I like the main title and the chapter title because they are open to interpretation. I'm intrigued as to what ...

Oh my gosh!! We finally found out how Juno went blind, NOT what I was expecting. You gave me such a shock and before I could even get over that ...

A touching piece. I liked the way you kept me guessing till the end, the suspense was as good as the emotive elements. I've got to admit that I generally ...

Oo-oh! The plot thickens, I like the ending very much. Part of me hopes she'll get caught and maybe get help but part of me likes Lalia. That part of ...

Awesome. This story is really creepy, I love the idea of the child with the internal conflict. Lalia is such a pretty name, the sheer irony of it (being that ...

Hi Talia, BellaRoma here to rescue you from the green room on review day. I like the development of AJ in this chapter, she likes art - cool! This also ...

Hey niraco. I'm going to review your next chapter for review day. I can't see any grammar errors so it was perfectly clear. I liked the addition of the prince ...

Hey. I don't quite know what to say about this other than that I think the title is extremely interesting. Not quite sure as to its significance yet but I'm ...

Oh-kay. You just killed your main character, was not expecting that. By doing that the whole way I thought the story was going to go has changed COMPLETELY but... I ...

I love astronomy too. I went through a phase of it and can still name all the star signs. I love how huge and enigmatic the topic is. You captured ...

Oh. My. GOSH! I felt so sad when Oskar died even though I was kind of expecting it. Then, if that wasn't bad enough 'Nazza' has no sympathy for Taylor ...

I loved the wording of this poem. As soon as I saw the title I HAD to read it because it was about synesthesia (which would be a totally cool ...