BellaRoma

Hey! Thanks for adding me to the list by the way. This story never ceases to get darker. You keep outdoing yourself... awesome! I can see what you mean about ...

Hi Kanome. I'm going to review this and get it out of the Green Room. I can't find any errors, so I'll just say what I thought. I found this ...

Hey Timmy. I'm here for a review because you've been keeping up with my story and so that I have this reviewed before you post the next part. It's only ...

Whoah, what an ending! The description of the room shifting was pretty cool. I'm looking forward to seeing what she's about to discover. You really don't give anything away, do ...

I've got to admit, I was a little confused here. This is the same narrator, right? Also, is the MC a he or a she? It's only really because of ...

Hey Timmy, me again to review. I have one nitpick, so I'll just get it out of the way. I hear the door open (or at least I hear it ...

Okay, I said I'd get to reviewing this Timmy. After reading the next couple of chapters, I class this one as more of a link to the later developments. Of ...

Oh. My. God! Ben's brother raped Juno? This changes everything, what if Ben works it out? How is he supposed to tell her that (or keep it from her, but ...

Hi, Pinkie. This is an interesting new viewpoint you've added in, I'm guessing that this guy is bounty hunter of some sort, or maybe one of the guards. It's good ...

Let's start reviewing as I won't get much chance later. This is obviously at the top of my list. I did promise to leave a review. I love how you ...

Hi Blackwood, I thought I'd attempt to review this action packed chapter. It had gore aplenty (by my standards, anyway) that added dramatic effect to it. Did you mean to ...

Good to see that you've persevered with this Pinkiegirl. As was said before, by Kelpies, you have a couple of errors with syntax. Those are easy enough to spot, just ...

Hello Pinkiegirl13, following your novel as promised. I thought I'd come and read the second part for you. Alright, I'll get the nitpicks out of the way first. There isn't ...

Ah, Bruno, Ben and Juno?... Demise? That title has so much foreshadowing, I'm lost for words. Then the car accident, where did you get the idea for that? I was ...

I like this for a start. Yes! I'm not the only one who was reminded of Frozen XD. It's not a bad movie all in all. This set the scene ...