BeeTeaDubs525

!Wow! First, let me just say I love this. I enjoy the way you made the sentences flow. From O to U is where I really noticed. It works nicely. ...

To begin, in the first stanza you use the word ‘alone’ four times. I was confused as to why you wanting to be alone and yet you ware walking alone ...

Hi there! I can’t understand your goal or purpose in writing this. I feel like it’s a short answer to what you did over holiday vacation. Maybe you could expand ...

Interesting topic choice! It made me think about something that would have never occurred to me. I love new ideas like this. Who would have thought about writing about a ...

I myself have not really known the pain of loving your best friend without reciprocation. I feel like you really did a great job displaying your slight annoying acceptance because ...

The last line “don’t let The light burn you on your way out.” Reminds me of the saying ‘don’t let the door hit you on the way out.’ I feel ...

I loved reading this. I can feel the sweet and depressing notes from start to finish. I think all of the ”Oh moments” mentioned are things that strike close to ...

I feel your hurt while reading this. The pain of a relationship that is going nowhere and not meant to be. Your honesty and loyalty sounds unrequited. The ending, to ...