Beautifulsparkle

Hello. Thank you for your review. Yeah, I shouldn't have made him talk in third person there. Anyway Mojo talked about dividing and conquering. But I meant it as a ...

Hello, I am here to comment on your self-reflection on self-reflection. To be truthful this work made me reflect on how much time I spend like a zombie in front ...

Well i know hell was created for the devil and that he was an angel of light before and that he rebelled and that was his punishment. I thought everyone ...

When i said sin was like a desease i did not mean mental illness is sin only that i c ompared sin with a spiritual diisease., you know.

I am sorry if you felt offended. I did not mean to write anything destructive really. I did not say Jesus can cure all of them, (that is up to ...

To tell you the truth i didn't even know of the word mandrel myself at first. I asked Christ for a rhyme for scoundrel and instantly the word mandrel got ...

Hello, your poem is very realistic and is talking about the dangers of meeting people on the internet and falling for them. That is indeed very dangerous as you do ...

I understand the desire of correcting grammar mistakes. Skool is how they write it in the cartoon, i love that show.

Hello. In regards to Marshall he'll be important to the story later. I wanted him to sound repressed but also sarcastic and more open to talk his opinion but only ...

Than you for your review.

Well, either Sev somehow broke the time turner while he time travelled because it was unstable or it simply can't travel back to his past that far, because time travel ...

Hello, i'm here to review this poem. I love it because i can relate to the feeling of heartbreak and the way you described it is accurate. Although i did ...

I love this poem. Your descriptions are very beautiful, like i'm staring enraptured at a field of beautiful gems while i'm reading. I feel for poor Snow White... I love ...

I love this poem. Your descriptions are very beautiful, like i'm staring enraptured at a field of beautiful gems while i'm reading. I feel for poor Snow White... I love ...

Hello, i really loved this touching poem, especially since it is dedicated to your younger sibling. The fact that you shaped the poem like a butterfly makes it even more ...