BeTheChange

The punctuation error is near the end of the first paragraph under %u201CBirth of Fake News%u201D. The awkward phrasing is in the first paragraph of the actual essay after the ...

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Where do I begin? 1. I am not a Muslim, but I should still be able to get your meaning through context. Unfortunately, that context is absent, making for a ...

Again, you overuse commas. However, it's better/easier to read than any of your previous works! I like the plot--it's very original, while still holding fast to certain well-loved tropes and ...

I skimmed this...even in the actual books, I never cared much about this info. Sorry! I like that you gave them names consistent with how the Erin Hunters named all ...

Interesting... The grammar is about the same as in the last chapter: Better, but a little off. Your main problem, especially in he beginning, is verb tense issues. There was ...

This will probably be more positive than before. My overall impression: That's creepy--in a good way! The grammar has improved, though there are still a few things I could point ...

This was good! I don't know how much I'll be able to say, but I can't wait to find out what happens. You have a few grammar issues, but nothing ...

ETA: I decided that I'll read the next two, at least.

I don't remember exactly, since I wrote this in February. :) I don't plan to read the sequels.

Well, this was depressing. (And about thirteen years old at this point, but never mind that). I can't say I liked the message, but hey, it's the truth, I guess. ...

I'm not sure how much I can say about this poem. I liked the nostalgic feel, I liked the descriptions, and there were no real grammatical problems. The word "unignorable" ...

I noticed some overly-long sentences and some phrases that needed to be followed by commas. Also, it switched from present to past tense, but overall, this was good. You gave ...

"Sense of entitlement"? The only thing I feel "entitled" to is equal treatment. You misunderstand my poem. Thanks for trying, but your "review" doesn't affect me.

I may use this in the future! It's really good, very detailed, but not exhaustingly long. The only problem is, how can I review something like this? (One thing: You ...

Oh, okay. Sorry. I got confused. Your story is good, anyway.