BeTheChange

This was confusing, but, hey, when you're writing a lullaby, it's the sound that counts. That and the care/love going into it. You deliver on both counts. Sound: The flow ...

This was a great poem. The imagery was detailed and rich, but unlike other poems I've read, it wasn't heavy or overblown. I'm not very well versed on mythology, so ...

This was interesting, a little vague but pretty good. I didn't like the rhymes that appeared occasionally, if they were intentional. They didn't fit with the rest of the story ...

You're "so not a poet", except that you are an exceptional poet. :) Despite the author's note and its warnings/implications, I really, really liked this! I liked the countless, but ...

This was okay. I liked the parallels to the first Percy Jackson book. However, the writing left something to be desired. Some examples: I noticed a few comma errors and ...

This was funny, and semi-relatable, but, I'm sorry, there were sliiight offensive undertones, implications of binge-eating disorder. Please don't be offended by my social justice-ness. I just had to p

I'm not in band, but I needed this reminder: The value of an activity is in how much fun it is, not how good you are at it. So, thank ...

This was sad, and meaningful, and well-written, but also all over the place. It flitted from theme to theme a bit too quickly, making it a bit confusing. Not to ...

Wow...this could come off as a little cliche, if it's not based on a true story, but if you're writing based on real experiences, it's pretty good! Either way, I ...

First off, grammar errors need to be addressed. I won't mention every single one, but "Well he had some idea" should have a comma between well and he. I like ...

I have no familiarity with The Elder Scrolls, but this was the oldest work in the Green Room, so I figured, why not review it anyway? I was confused about ...

I haven't read the previous chapters, but I could understand almost everything in this, so that's not a problem. I felt like the writing was off somehow. Maybe it was ...

I have to admit, I thought that this would be dumb, but it was a dark, intense, dramatic tale...that happened to be based on Dora the Explorer. How did this ...

So, this had YWS inside jokes, which I liked, although I'm kind of new so I didn't understand all of the references. I think your writing could be silghtly better. ...

I liked the format, although the brackets and double slashes aren't my personal favorite. I also liked the imagery. Finally, I liked the theme--as much as one can 'like' something ...