Barbilo

Hi, the Black Sheep. This poem is powerful and touches upon what many media outlets today choose to ignore. I am glad you chose this topic and I actually clicked ...

Hello Ritu, Barbs here for a review. You have a great fantasy here. I love the way the main character relates to Stepini, the queen and Lord Jupiter. Here are ...

Hello PickledChrissy, Barbs here for a review. I really love your story, the characters and amazing and the story line is on point. As I was reading, it played like ...

Hi Inked. Barbilo, here for a review. This is a powerful short piece that talks about the saddest moment in Ariana's life. Even more, this piece can relate to a ...

Truth be told, I will never look at mice the same way again after reading this. Well done on creating depth on a world that has never been explored before, ...

This is an interesting Ravinder, excellent content. In any case, I will say pay more attention to grammar and punctuation. Like in this case: " Time:10;30 pm Dear Diary, I ...

Thriver, this is a lovely short poem. It is lovely because even if it is short, each sentence holds a lot of meaning and still contributes to the bigger picture ...

You have a great imagination Dancingtreeelf. When I started reading the story, I did not expect that twist. Great story, here is my review and what you can improve on: ...

Hello CaliCo, I must say your story is interesting, very easy to read and follow as well as filled with adequate action to keep the reader coming for more. Daniel ...

Hello TheSilverFox, What a bitter-sweet story. Well, the end may hint at being more positive but the greed of the beneficiaries is sad. Your description of them, however, is brilliant. ...

This is neat. You write very well and it is easy to follow so well done. My review: - Time telling is so OTN (On the nose). Of course, time ...

Hi Kymorphens, this is an interesting piece and I like how you give us time to learn who the characters are, their relationship with each other and the system around ...

Your description, grammar and character development is great. You took time to write this one out and it can be seen so my review will be short. - It is ...

Hi, ThatAlaskanchick, being able to write two stories in one is a really special skill especially combining third person and first person. It makes it even more interesting. Here is ...

It is refreshing to read about leading female characters. That's good. Here is my review: - I suppose the time period is ancient. If so, did women those days wear ...