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Hello there! Quick review for you.... I absolutely LOVE this!! You did an excellent job with expressing emotion in this poem. Your grammar is good but there are a few ...

Hi! Just a quick review for you... I really like this poem! The first line automatically captured my attention. "I am such a fool/ to think that my heart would ...

Hello! Just a quick review... I really like this poem! I think throughout your theme stays true to the title. This topic is something that I think a lot of ...

Hey! Here with a quick review! This is really good! I am already liking the characters a lot! I haven't read your previous chapters yet but I'm confused about whether ...

Quick review for you... This is awesome! Your words really paint a picture in my mind. Especially the little girl swinging on the playground. I feel like I can really ...

Quick review... This is awesome! I'm excited to learn a bit more about the past relationships between Ava, Stellan, and Melody. I will agree with SimpleBicycle that it gets a ...

Alright, a quick review.... I really like this story and it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through! Just a few little things to clarify: ...

Just a quick review.... This is so cute! This story is adorable and your grammar is pretty good as well. I love how you make this story seem like the ...

Wow! This is amazing! I really love how you worded all of this and made me feel like this character was speaking to me directly. You clearly showed her progression ...

Quick review for you... I love this so much! Your vocabulary is wonderful and you paint such a beautiful. I think this poem really speaks truth too. There are those ...

This is so cute! I love the amount of effort you put into this! And the drawings are fabulous! I know if i was a little kid, I would love ...

Wow! This is incredible! To me it seems like there is a beautiful spirit, gentle and kind, who breathes her life into all the plants. Your vocabulary is very good ...

Alright, I'll try to give you some constructive criticism here. Number one thing to work on: grammar. You do fine most of the time but then there's a slip. I ...

This is great! It gives us a kind of suspense that makes me want to read more and more. Now for the review... First, you could make one sentence into ...

Okay, this is my first review but here it goes.... I thought this story was fun and easy to follow. I love how you took a rumor that was floating ...