Baconator

I loved your use of dark humor for this! How the main character would sometimes switch from third person to first person, realizing that he was his own makes you ...

Great use of dark humor! I'm very interested on how you got some of the ideas for this story, such as a dermatologist, the cheating husband, and especially the baloons! ...

Humorous and explains the situation of most bedrooms. I like the poem's descriptiveness and voice. It has a very good rhyme scheme and the rhythm is cool. boring to the ...

I like how you use the image you see of the ocean in your mind as an escape from hard times in reality. The fourth stanza, I keep staring at ...

Just curious, what is the poem talking about? It seems to sound like it's inffering nature, as in the first stanza, Who breaks but remains unbroken? Who bore first life ...

It makes you think about how the worst feeling we can have is feeling nothing. Also I think about how it can feel like nobody listens to anything we say ...

I love how it relates to everyday life. There always someone talking and acting like a hot-shot or trying to be funny. Sometimes that person is ourselves. You get so ...

Amazing! I like how it shows that there is hope for all of the great things there are in life. It explains all of the things that all living things ...

Coming from someone starting high school, this is a very comforting poem. I like how the theme kind of revolves around how as scary and frustrating as high school may ...

Great work! :) It makes me think of peaceful summer nights. I like how the poem is very descriptive and full of imagery. The only grammatical issue I could find ...

Awesome work! The only grammatical issue I found was the word "or" spelled "ot" in the big paragraph. Or maybe you meant for it to be that way. I like ...

Applying for college sounds like an extremely aggravating process. I wish you luck! Anyways, it is a great protrayal of how complicated it school is in modern times. Like how ...

Epic poem! It was like a suspenseful action thriller poem (which I have never seen the like of before). Keep doing awesome epic poetry :) I liked how the ending ...

Cool story! I like how the theme puts into a literal pespective that time seems to get away from us and its hard to hold onto memories. The only grammatical ...

Hilarious! Its funny how you don't get the title until the end. Lame jokes always make everything better too. “What happened to the Mad Scientist who fell into a vat ...