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I like this poem. Simple, short and so sweet. I can't find anything wrong with it, I love it. I don't know who she is but for some reason I get the impression of mother nature and the world. I like how she can be whoever we want it to be, but I think the impression of mother nature might just be me.
Entrancing poem! It has this really melodic flow, soft and smooth. Very beautiful piece! This review isn't going to be very helpful, because I can't find anything wrong! The only thing, maybe would be...
The first comma might not have to be there, because this could be read as a complete sentence, but then again, the comma is part your poem structure, so being consitent is good also. It works either way.
Anyway, great job!
<..> Kat
Very beautiful and elegant. I love the freeform of it. The only thing I would suggest would be altering the second verse a bit. I don't know if it was just my reading but it didn't seem to flow as nicely as the rest of it. Still, it was beautiful! you're a talented poet
Amazing! I like how it shows that there is hope for all of the great things there are in life. It explains all of the things that all living things really want. I am curious how the voice switches from "it" to "her". Great work!
This is very beautiful. I love poetry so much that a lot of times I just can't see anything wrong with any of it. It doesn't have to rhyme, or make sense, so as long as the writer has good spelling and grammer I think it's perfect! And that's what this is. Great poem!
--Lizzie Droll