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Re: The Bright Light
Hi! So I'm just going to give this a review, and let me just start out by saying, I really like the title of your story. It is very interesting ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Talk to Me
Oh my gosh!!! I really hope that you get the scholarship! I'm sure you'll do great, and hope that this review will help! I'll be sure to judge it hard, ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Why?
Hey! So I see you posted this one minute ago, and I thought you'd like to see some crazy fast reviews and I'd love to give them. Let me just ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Forgotten Fire, Chapter 3 - False
Hi! So let me just start out by saying, good job on the description. The description is where you have to hook someone, that and the first sentence. I think ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: Alone
First off may I just say that your description really hooked me, so good job on that. And just by the title and description, I can tell you are a ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: Things happen, life goes on!
Hi! So I thought this title and description was really good and it hooked me so I'm going to review it for. I'm sure you didn't make many mistakes but ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: Bang
Hi! So I might repeat on some of the errors, but I saw the description and I was hooked. Good job! So don't mind if repeat on anything. "It was ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: DUET :Chapter 5:
Sorry for that, didn't mean to. But I see that nobody has reviewed this and that always makes me sad, so I would love. Even though I know nothing about ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: DUET :Chapter 5:
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Sep 21, 2015
Sorry for that, didn't mean to. But I see that nobody has reviewed this and that always makes me sad, so I would love. Even though I know nothing about ... -
Re: The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~
Hi! I was really excited to start reading the chapter, and you met my expectations. Good job! But you do have some errors that I'll point out. And by the ...
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 1 ~Time~
Hi! This is a very interesting story. This being a review I'm going to talk to you about the strong suits in this story, because I couldn't find any mistakes. ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Wilting (Finale of the not-so-short story)
This is a beautiful story, I'm going to cry. You did have some errors that I'll point out: You said "I afraid not," I think you meant "I'm afraid not," ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: One Man for Himself - Chapter 1: The Flight
Hi! This is a very interesting story so far and I think that you can do great things with it. Although I have some tips: In the first paragraph you ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Fall
This a really nice story. The words really milked through my head, the sentences were really well put together. This is a type of story that I would really put ...
Jun 4, 2015
