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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Bright Light

    Hi! So I'm just going to give this a review, and let me just start out by saying, I really like the title of your story. It is very interesting ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Talk to Me

    Oh my gosh!!! I really hope that you get the scholarship! I'm sure you'll do great, and hope that this review will help! I'll be sure to judge it hard, ...

    Oct 15, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Why?

    Hey! So I see you posted this one minute ago, and I thought you'd like to see some crazy fast reviews and I'd love to give them. Let me just ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forgotten Fire, Chapter 3 - False

    Hi! So let me just start out by saying, good job on the description. The description is where you have to hook someone, that and the first sentence. I think ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone

    First off may I just say that your description really hooked me, so good job on that. And just by the title and description, I can tell you are a ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Things happen, life goes on!

    Hi! So I thought this title and description was really good and it hooked me so I'm going to review it for. I'm sure you didn't make many mistakes but ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Bang

    Hi! So I might repeat on some of the errors, but I saw the description and I was hooked. Good job! So don't mind if repeat on anything. "It was ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 5:

    Sorry for that, didn't mean to. But I see that nobody has reviewed this and that always makes me sad, so I would love. Even though I know nothing about ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 5:

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    Sorry for that, didn't mean to. But I see that nobody has reviewed this and that always makes me sad, so I would love. Even though I know nothing about ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~

    Hi! I was really excited to start reading the chapter, and you met my expectations. Good job! But you do have some errors that I'll point out. And by the ...

    Jun 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 1 ~Time~

    Hi! This is a very interesting story. This being a review I'm going to talk to you about the strong suits in this story, because I couldn't find any mistakes. ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Wilting (Finale of the not-so-short story)

    This is a beautiful story, I'm going to cry. You did have some errors that I'll point out: You said "I afraid not," I think you meant "I'm afraid not," ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: One Man for Himself - Chapter 1: The Flight

    Hi! This is a very interesting story so far and I think that you can do great things with it. Although I have some tips: In the first paragraph you ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Fall

    This a really nice story. The words really milked through my head, the sentences were really well put together. This is a type of story that I would really put ...

    Jun 4, 2015


"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind