BEASTtheHUN

Check out the prologue, please. If you do, leave a comment if you do. I need all the help.

Oh, that makes sense.

Thanks!

Thanks!

I like this poem, it doesn't make me feel like I am completely lost in a sea of literary imagery. That being said, the imagery is very, very good. I ...

Thanks!

Where is the story?

Thanks. I already finished the 1st chapter, I just haven't posted it yet.

Thank you!

Thanks, I'll check it out soon.

Oh, uh, okay thanks for the heads up. Otherwise, you might have fried my brain cells.

Sounds familiar, Hmm LOL, no cap one of the first Science fiction I understood with all the terms.

Thanks, dude!

Dude no problem.

I feel like, and maybe it's just me, that you are switching in and out of tenses. "Suddenly Elise felt a pain coming from her head as if she bumped ...