BEASTtheHUN

Okay, I am going to get right to it, I am not going to comment on grammar, I think the people below me have already done that. I really like ...

Wow, I really like this poem a lot. It is so complex and interesting. It tells a story that is quite interesting to read. It kind of reminds me of ...

I like this story a lot. The flow is really good and it keeps you moving along at a steady pace. I am really interested in the hooded man. The ...

I really liked this chapter, reading the first line I was instantly hooked, and that's the sign of a good writer. I am not going to tell you the errors ...

I loved the way you ended this story, it really makes you question. I like the description of the ghosts, and I think the flow is relatively good, but the ...

I love it, L-O-V-E, love it. The description sucks you in, and along with the flawless flow, keeps you interested till the end. I just wish there was more. There ...

This story has a very nice flow to it. The way that you described the room was simply splendid. I find myself looking for more, I feel like I am ...

I love this story, I think I missed the ones before this, but I'll catch up. The idea is great, and the terms are incredibly original. The imagery sucks me ...

Woah. Where's the rest, I feel like a dog chasing its tail. That's all, that was amazing, I need more than that. Yo, you gotta tag me on the next ...

This is absolutely, positively, incredible. This blew me away. I honestly am speechless right now. There's not really much criticism I can give this at all, but I just have ...

I like the idea of this chapter, I like where it's going. For some reason When I first started reading this, it reminded me of the way of kings by ...

This so far is a superb and engaging story. The flow is perfect, and it moves your story along at just the right pace. The one thing I would criticize ...