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Re: Apanthropia
I find this piece immensely refreshing. There is a poise and gravity that is displayed through each word. I can feel the weight of the thought that was placed into ...
Apr 24 -
Re: I'll Be Your Contradiction (By Lavender)
I want to preface this by saying that I hope you're a fan of brutally honest reviews. That being said, the first thing that I notice about this piece is ...
Apr 24 -
Re: i need a hug. (harry styles one-shot)
First off the bat, singular impressions, I like the playfulness of this piece. The whole Harry Styles hug lore, you have taken a pop-culture topic and made a playful story ...
Feb 19, 2024 -
Re: "Candy" (Based on True Events) - Part Two
Hey there here is my review as promised. First things first, this piece was a lot lengthier than I expected, but nonetheless well put together, this does come across as ...
Feb 12, 2024 -
Re: Oil Heads: Prologue and Chapter 1
Okay, first things first, you're giving me major "The Outsiders" vibe. Greaser, older brother taking care of his younger brothers. Even the fact that there are 7 members, I don't ...
Jan 16, 2024 -
Re: everythingwasbeautiful¬hinghurt
First of all, you have done an amazing job with this poem. I love the fact that you didn't capitalize anything, it adds this impression of empty space and missing ...
Oct 16, 2023 -
Re: Perhaps
NIIIIIIIIICCCCEEEE. You had to pull daphne out of retirement though. I like the idea. We've all been through this before. As in a show reference, "It's like you wanna crawl ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: Abecedarian (LMS 1)
This was really, really, really good. Some of the words were confusing, in the fact that I didn't understand your meaning. I like how you used such rich imagery. It ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: Document
I like this poem. The shortness of each stanza seems to fit just right with the poem. I like the subtle description that you sneak into each line and the ...
Aug 31, 2022 -
Re: The Art of Atelophobia
Wow. God damn, that hit hard. I love this poem, the falling and rising and sinking art. One critique is I felt like this would have hit harder if you ...
May 23, 2022 -
Re: The Great God of Writing
I like the humor of this work, especially, "Should I write crap. they'd chuck lightning". That had me rolling. I like the simplicity of this work. No big words, it ...
May 23, 2022 -
Re: kintsugi / rebuilding from stockholm syndrome
This poem is truly touching, in a weird sort of way. I'm a fan of your poetry. Understandable and deep at the same time just like poems should be. The ...
Mar 3, 2022 -
Re: Dusk is in these lights.
This is a very good poem. The descriptive imagery is eye-opening and paints a vivid picture in your head. The last sentence is oddly placed. The capitalization of and is ...
Feb 24, 2022 -
Re: Estranged
Okay. Lets start by saying that the beginning is good. It makes you wonder about sam, but you do an amazing job describing him. That being said, your ending was ...
Nov 30, 2021 -
Re: “You know you’ll die, right?”
This poem is amazing. It tells a story that just resonates with me. Not particularly because I have experience, and that's what I like about this poem. You don't need ...
Jul 28, 2021
