Azila

I've come to review, as requested. Sorry it took a little while, I've been pretty busy in my non-YWS life not to mention with my contest and all. ANYWAY... Dusky ...

Hello, Camille! My pelt begins to prickle, but I do not move. My limbs are heavy with warmth, and I want to enjoy the sunset for a while longer. A ...

Hi, alleycat! Nitpicks first... Maybe this will be the time; maybe she’ll play with me this time, I think. I agree with Gyrfalcon: you don't need the "I think." In ...

Hi there, Gadi! I really liked this! (thus giving it 1st) 2. Men come and leave their loves by my gates; slowly, my sidewalks seem to pour open. I agree ...

Hi there, Marionette! I don't know if you've read my post yet, but you won 3rd place. Congratulations! Nitpicks first: Couldn’t he just put his feet up on the couch ...

Hi there Cat! I don't know if you've read my post yet, but you won 2nd place! Congratulations! Climb. Small tree. Smells like squirrels. Dry. Not warm but still dry. ...

There isn't anything blatantly wrong with this piece, but there isn't anything outstandingly phenomenal either. In fact there isn't much of ANYTHING! ^_~ Dear Saint is right--there isn't enough of ...

Hi there BBB! Nitpicks first... Have you ever listened to your heart thump against your chest at night, when no one is around to hear it? The pulse is outstandingly ...

Hi there, Muffin! Nitpicks first. It had been a very long day, and Marie was having difficulty thinking of anything other than her bathtub, and settling down with her favorite ...

Firstly, I want to welcome you to the YWS! Secondly, I have never read Twilight, so I can't accuse you of plagiarism like the other two reviewers have. Thirdly, please ...

I think I liked this. XD The first go 'round, I had not clue what I was reading, but the second time it made more sense. I like how it ...

One of the security guards said that last year people went to class in their pyjamas. "pyjamas" should be "pajamas" :D Well, Aedomir pointed out all the other things I ...

Hi there Stella! I really enjoyed reading this, but more details later--I'll start with the nitpicks... Saying goodbye to Tom was the hardest thing I ever had to do. I ...

Hi there and welcome to the YWS! Nitpicks first. She had looked after him since he had been a wee lad, mothering him and patching him up when he scraped ...

Hi there, and welcome to the YWS! I can be as mean as I want? Oh goody. :D Nitpicks first... There are three things that should be known about me: ...