AutumnSun

I can sense the pain. I like how the topic is serious but it is simply written. It works but there are a few repetitions. I would suggest you expand ...

The story was kind of interesting and I can see it turning into something great! You left me in suspense but there are a few spelling errors that distract me. ...

As an hopeless romantic, I am attracted to these kind of stories. I thought was great but it moved so quickly. I would suggest adding more emotion and details. It ...

I like how you set up a good image. You are obviously talented. I liked "numbness spread through his body like an icy poison" I would love to read more ...

I am literally a bit teary eyed right now. I actually had to stop typing for a few seconds. This piece was so moving. Intense subject but simply told. The ...

I read this as if I were the one who accepts you into college, as if I were an administrator. I liked the first few lines because you were honest, ...

There were a few spelling mistakes that distracted me from the story but not enough to enjoy it. Your description of the man was almost a turn off, but it ...

Wow! That was incredible! It was abstract and that's why I liked it! It was short and I wanted to know more. I felt left in suspense but that may ...

I had to read that twice. I almost missed the double meaning. I feel like the dragon was a symbol for something. I like how this story is so obvious ...

It's different, very original. Interesting style. I did enjoy it. I admit I was confused at first. It is a little dark then the last part is happy. I wonder ...

First of all, I liked it because it was unique. It's interesting how it is under romantic short stories but it feels so dark. At the same time, it doesn't. ...

It is sweet and simple. I don't think all songs and poems have to be intense. I think my heart aches to and my head says no should be out. ...

It was really deep. I liked the last 6 lines. It was such a shift, more dark and I didn't expect that. It actually works really well. I like it ...

Other than the spelling, It is a really great start! I can see it becoming an amazing song, actually! Yes, it's very rough now and that is obvious but it ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I have no interest in math or science. I think it is extremely difficult to write a poem with those terms but still sound interesting. ...