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"I simply miss you. A breeze cannot carry me into your arms. My knives to the side & your bombs returned, I'm ready if you are." I LOVE that stanza! ...

empty answers empty hearts I cannot see It is too dark You say something I heard you speak I try to listen I try to reach if you expect so ...

Helllooo. Firstly, I enjoyed reading this, but there's just a few things that I noticed, which I will point out for you. Ellie approached Travis with caution in the summer ...

First grade class Crayons on paper Instructions to draw A family picture... Already, this poem has my attention. Weelll done. :D The teacher stops Sits next to him Quietly asks ...

Saying sorry doesn't mean anything to me. I like this opening line. :) Sorry doesn't make the world a better place, to live or to stay. Hmm, for this, I ...

Another old write. I have no name I am but a ghost For no one see's me Even as I lie here Among the crowds I see the faces Drifting ...

I liked this (: I'm Christian but I don't find this offending at all. It's completely true, well most of it. I loved the entire poem. How did you come ...

Two words were all I had. Brilliant opening line (; But I knew it was not enough. Three times you told me so, and I shall never forget. Many thing ...

I never imagined these thoughts would trouble my most internal organs. This opening line doesn't really suit for me. Like, it's too long and sort of detailed compared to the ...

Hi. Sorry this isn't going to be a very important or good review, so you can just...not take any notice of it. Anyways, I really liked this! I don't know ...

Apparently I need to work on the quality of my reviews, but other words, they're crap. So sorry if mine sucks. lead here in the ditches fighting for too long ...

I Am From... I am from peanut butter and bacon grease and the old wooden tree house. I really like this opening sentence. Idk why, it's just really...welcoming? :) I ...

There is not much to critique on this. It's really good, for a not-poet that is. :P I could only advise to make it longer, but you said you would ...

This was really cool! I didn't seem to find anything wrong with it, but I'll leave the nitpicking to the better reviewers. Anyways, this was...this was good. I loved the ...

"It was nothing babe, I didn't even mean for it to happen." If only i