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I stopped a quarter-through this, because I realized this is in parts and I'm going to start from the very beginning and edit this when I'm done, mmkay? c: Your ...

Ah! Thanks for the suggestions, you've given me an idea/insight to expand and develop this further, in next revisions ill try to incorporate the character of the speaker more, develop ...

It's a word, apparently! I heard it first from Morgan Freeman. He used the word when talking about why he was staying in Mississippi (despite his millionare status/tremendous success) I ...

Yep!

Oh man. It was supposed to be this picture. I resized it thinking it'd show up better and look what it does! smh

You, sir are awesome! Thanks for highlighting the disjointed ideas between the stanzas - that was something I completely overlooked and you are right about what it evokes. I think ...

Thank you for your review ^_^ I'll see if I can answer all of your questions, but if I may ask what part of the poem confused you? > 1512, ...

I might reconsider the colloquialism. But, ah, thanks so much for this thoughtful review! It's actually super helpful to see your thoughts about it.

Thank you! The poem is about conversation, it's all colloquial in tone and spelling. Think of it as dialogue.

TY for your review! If you don't mind where (or which) are the words troubling/losing meaning?

The poem is about an experience of hunger. Thanks so much! The cool thing about being a mod: I deleted the 2nd post and marked it as a review for ...

I think cgirl is referring to the Chinese mooncake that come in variety of fillings. The version I described is fictional though, and the name just happens to be coincidental. ...

I like the white background! :O

You should see me when Sachi's around ;D