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Wisegirl, welcome back! The particular line mentioned is talking about the experience of a warm rain. I can take a closer look at the diction here, it may be the ...

xD Open book means open book, tree and moss means there's a tree with moss, there are no allusions there. Thanks for the review.

XD Have you ever had a friend who takes a joke seriously? I am that friend, o.o

Bookwolf! I'm sorry, but I have a fundamental disagreement with this poem: I sizzle beneath a cold hand, and intoxicate all who breathe me in. if I were to breathe ...

She still laughs, even as she's dead in her morning walks? I mean... that's really impressive, wow LOLOL, your review makes me smile so hard. XD Zly! I remember that ...

:D Thanks for reading!

I actually don't mind critiques on the effectiveness of style, go for it if you really want. ^_~ Thanks for reading.

:O REALLY? Lol, that is siiick

Alpha, Ancient, AND Fort This is obviously the pain of feeling left out :c

Anytime!

Thank you!!

OH! I love that idea, that makes much more sense and frames these experiences in a more interesting perspective than what I initially got. I think the word "touched on" ...

Thank you so much, you've been very encouraging =^_^= Second part is here , if you're interested.

Thanks so much! I'm happy someone noticed the stairs, I really want an architecture-like appearance for this. ^^

Ahhhh thank you so much! :D ::happy dance:: Yes, she is surrounded by air and land and sea. Might be a poor use of breaks there. Some plums are pinkish! ...