Audy

Hey Rhia! It's good to see a poem from you again ^^ When I see the title and the poem as a whole, I'm reminded of children afflicted with cancer, ...

xD Ha, this poem is charming, Aley! I agree with you, I like the fireflies as well and I immediately got the message that the particular lined evoked, so I ...

Aabbcc -- I'm immediately thinking couplets! And then not disappointed xD I'm also not a fan of the breaks in stay- ed. I used to do that as well, just ...

Aley, I think you're right about this one in that the middle needs some work or (I suggest to nix it out of this poem and use the middle as ...

Aley! I don't know if this needs more perse, what effect are you trying to go for? For me, I'm reading a list of things that freedom is in alphabetical ...

Hey Laure! Why is there a period in the middle of the poem setting up uncomfortable fragments? Your title though, I adore. When I'm thinking of carved words, I'm thinking ...

D'awww, there's something sweet about hope at the end. Loved it. Especially nice control of the rhymes and rhythm, the flow of it all was smooth as silk jazz ice ...

Hey Indie ^^ So, whereas "Gambler" toed on the line of elaboration - this one toes on the line of vagueness. Simply speaking from my own enjoyment of these pieces, ...

Indie, This is lovely as always. The poem strikes me as having this inherent flow of thoughts and memories; it all winds up pointing towards the reconciliation of a lost ...

C: And I'm caught up! Yay! So! We should really get YWS notifications for when the stories that we follow get updated, don't'cha think? So, there's this kind of full-circle ...

It marked a week since Parker's first visit, and the end of Michael's stay, SO it IS Michael who lives in No-man's land! :O Well. I feel so much better ...

and Francis had to be reminded not to hug me too hard by a nurse with blonde hair and pretty green eyes Syntactically, the placments of your phrases in this ...

Hey Isha! So my laptop broke last week (fun!) so I'm on the market for a new one, but for the moment I'm back and I shall dive right into ...

Ms. Audy 5153 Profile Page People Tab, YWS 10923 Tuesday, March 04, 2014 Dear Mr. Strange, I am composing this letter in regards to your recent featured work, "Dip, Dip, ...

Isha! I got through to chapter one for now -- I'll get by chapter two some time later. 1.1 My first impressions? It's so clean :/ Parker is going on ...