AubrielRose

Ok I enjoyed what you've got here. However, I would suggest a little work on the format. Some ofnthe lines were a little choppy. I also think it would make ...

I just want to let you know that it takes a certain kind of poet to be able to tell an entire story with out giving any real specifics to ...

I liked the idea you were getting across here. To me the piece was saying that you are only led go more darkness or woe by your own woe. However, ...

This made me laugh out loud! And I completely understand. One of the prices of literary talent is having trouble grasping subjects such as math. You got your frusterations out ...

I think this would be better catagorized as a poem. I did like it, though. You used a good choice of words. I got a good image of the man ...

I found this entertaining. I liked the writing style you used. It's almost like Jason is talking to the reader personally, telling the story. I would like it if you ...

You did a nice job expressing a lot of emotion through a limited amount of words. That requires a certain kind of talent, in which I am more often envious ...

I just want you to know that the people who are going to judge you really aren't worth listening to at all, and I know how hard that is to ...

I couldn't adore this poem more. In a way, it reminds me of Hughes and I mean that as a compliment (if you aren't a fan of Hughes). You have ...

This is a very thoughtful and relatable poem, and I liked it alot :) You just struggle a tad bit with keeping the idea interesting in each stanza. It seems ...

I can relate to this poem because when Bin Laden died, I seemed to be the only one out of my friends who saw it as murder, though, of course, ...