tell me the story about how the sun loved the moon so much he died every night to let her breathe.
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Hello there, Casanova! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! ^-^ I would like to point out how odd the format is. I noticed that in chat you mentioned that ...
Nov 1, 2016
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Hello there, KittyMew! This is Moonwatcher here with a review! ^-^ I think some stanzas to separate parts of the poem would help this poem out in terms of flow ...
Nov 1, 2016
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Hello there, DeepRoses! This is Moonwatcher here to review your poem! ^-^ The first thing I would like to point out here is the inconsistent rhyme scheme. If you choose ...
Oct 31, 2016
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Hello there, Anngelalu! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review! ^-^ Rhyme, great. I feel as if I've told so many people my opinions on rhyme, so I ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Hello there, Impetus9! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review! I want to point out how choppy, and hard the poem is to read. There seems to be ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Hello there, VenusChild! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review! ^-^ I would also like to say, welcome to the site! This is an extremely helpful community, and ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Hello again, Artemis28! This is Moonwatcher here yet again with another Review Day review! ^-^ I’ve been here for years, watching the world Go by. Okay so I see that ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Hello there, Artemis28! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review! As I was reading the title the first thing that came to mind was this; All jokes aside, ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Yoyoyo, Matt! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review. ^-^ The change stopped and you're back with me You're crying and apologizing but you don't see what I ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Hello there, FeatherPen! This is Moonwatcher here with a Review Day review! I'm going to jump right into the review, and the first thing I would like to cover here, ...
Oct 30, 2016
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Hey there, Binayak111! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review! To be honest, I don't really get this, which makes me assume that this is an interpretation poem. ...
Oct 29, 2016
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Hello there, Orel! This is Moonwatcher here with a Review Day review! You're very emotional, which I can tell through the nice way that you presented your tone and mood ...
Oct 29, 2016
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Hello there KiraThePotatoChip (or Anorexic Demon Tax Collector, whatever it was that you called yourself). :P This is Moonwatcher here with a Review Day review! ^-^ First things first, and ...
Oct 29, 2016
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Hello there, FrogPebbles! This is Moonwatcher here for a Review Day review! ^-^ Alright, this is a speech I pretty much give anybody who has a rhyming poem. It's more ...
Oct 29, 2016
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Hello there, nishthabawa2896! This is Moonwatcher here with my first review for review day! ^-^ The formatting is odd. I see the large indent per every other stanza, which makes ...
Oct 29, 2016
