Astronaut

Hello! Dominusatramentum here! First of all, awesome description. I've been waiting to read about some vampires that don't sparkle in the sunlight. What I liked the most is how you ...

Hello! Wow, nice story. It's a cool idea. I really liked the human-like computer that could think on its own (or should I say Its own? :D). Speaking of the ...

Hello! Dominusatramentum here! Wow. I really loved this. It was very Book Theif-esque. It's so good that I find it extremely difficult to review, in fact I am only reviewing ...

I really liked your story. Bullying is a popular theme, and I think you conveyed it well. A few nitpicks though... You have probably heard this before: Show, don't tell. ...

Guess I feel kind of obliged to review. "Midas was coming back to kill the scientists." This sentence felt very anticlimactic. Leave it up to us to assume, or add ...

Hello KindlingDragonsFire! Dominusatramentum here, reviewing for Red Writing Hood. Amazing story, really. I don't know how this stayed in the Green Room for more than a day. But there's really ...

This is actually the first Nightvale fanfiction I have read. Also, eerily enough, this the epidoe I am up to. Therefore, I feel compelled to review. I think you captures ...

What. Really, my main problem is that it's too rushed. Slow down. Take a breath. Your story was actually pretty funny. But had you composed it like an actual story, ...

Hello! That was shorter than I thought it would be. Anyway... I only noticed two things that just didn't seem likely. 1. Melody got detention. Why? Yeah, I know, she ...

Good girl, you did as I asked. *Pat pat.* So... I'm not even going to bother with all the spelling/grammar errors. THERE ARE SO MANY. "A bed lays in the ...

Hello Pony123! First of all, welcome to YWS. Second of all, I'm getting the sense that you like ponies and horses, based on your name, profile picture, and this story ...

Hello magpie! What drew me in was your title. At first I thought it was just that I had been reading too much Poe, but then I saw that rhiasofia ...

Hello Zedderman! Dominusatramentum at your service! This story looks quite interesting. But first I would like to say, is it truly a short story? You said it was an introduction, ...

Hi Blackwood! Dominusatramentum at your service to write a review. Wow. This story looks really, really good. I can already feel the character development to come. First, I would like ...

Yes. Me. Again. Hello. The first thing I noticed is that Jillian is immediately targeted for no reason. Yes, that can happen, but in movies and shows, it usually doesn't. ...