Astronaut

Hi! I love this story, because people usually think of math being decisive, with only one answer, and love being vague and open to interpretation. This story bridges that gap. ...

All right. Let's review! This was really good. The fact that it's in bold is distracting, but I'll assume that's a formatting error. It's just... I'm really confused. Alright, so ...

Ok. This is really good. I love the idea. But... PARAGRAPHS! I couldn't focus, because your paragraphs were huge. Way too big. Each line of dialogue gets its own, and ...

Hiya! I'm going to do my best to review this. I can't be certain what uni applications entail, due to the fact that I'm twelve. But I think I get ...

Well hi. I generally don't review poetry, but that's because I don't understand poetry. I understand this poem, so I'll get right to it. Well I'm finding criticism a bit ...

Hi! Let's get right to it. You have many grammatical errors, but I am certain that someone on here will take care of that for you. People on this site ...

This was really good in the beginning. I could follow it easily with no description, and it worked quite well. But then you introduced a third character, and BAM. Confusion ...

Hi! Okay, after reading it over and over and over, I think I got it. So the idea is that you're re-naming words according to what they sound like they ...

Hi! Alright, I am loving this play so far. But this scene was a little... unrealistic. You know, apart from the whole vampire thing. See, if Claudius thought vampires were ...

Hai. Ok, so from what I can tell, Juliette is looking for evidence of magic-y stuff, right? So she's reading all those books and she hides away in the sex-ed ...

Ok, I really love this, and I definitely think you should continue it. But the main critique I have is that it was too conversational. This is something I struggle ...

Jeez, seems like I have to read this series now! This is why I think they should put fanfiction on the back of the books. Onto the review: It's a ...

Okay I really like your story. I honestly do. But PARAGRAPHS PARAGRAPHS PARAGRAPHS. Seriously, I found this story very difficult to enjoy, because my eyes needed a break. Any time ...

Hello! Dominusatramentum here! Ooh, creepy. I like how the whole time you were never quite sure if it was jut the man's schizophrenia, or maybe, just maybe, it was real. ...

Hello! I'm not from NYC, but I might as well be. I spend a lot of time there. I was there yesterday, in fact! I'm not going to write a ...