Ashley123

First off, welcome to YWS. I hope to read more of your future posts. Anyway, I really loved your first piece. Firstly because of the fact that it was short. ...

I thought that this was a great and inspirational short story. I liked how the main character over came an obstacle, even though her mother said that she couldn't do ...

I thought that this was actually a pretty truthful and meaningful short story. Because honestly, the world is pretty messed up, and I'm glad that someone wrote an emotional, truthful ...

I loved this chapter. It was AMAZING! All of the events that happened in the prologue became somewhat explained in this piece, which I really liked by the way. Your ...

I thought that this was an AMAZING start to a new novel. Now I did notice a few errors, but nothing that can't be fixed. "She was shaking and looked ...

I thought that this was an amazing piece of writing! It really showed the dark truth about how people honestly have a hard time trusting anymore (it is the era ...

I thought that this was a good start to an interesting story. But honestly I had no idea what this was really about. It was very confusing with the random ...

I really loved the type of language you used. The descriptive words that really made a vivid picture in my mind. I really love your mysterious writing style, and the ...

This was a very good start to a novel, and the plot looks like it has real potential. The only thing that confused me was how this seemed more like ...

I thought that this was a very nice piece about love and loss. I really could feel the emotion and heart ache buried deep within the story. It was like ...

I really liked this piece. It really expressed all of my morals and values about God. I agree with you 100% with everything that you expressed here. I did notice ...

I really liked this short story. It was a neat way to describe how and why these creatures disappeared, well done. I did see a few minor mistakes, but as ...

Once again, this is a very nice and well organized poem. I really liked the story that it painted in my mind. Good job. This is very nice. I don't ...

I like this a lot. It really shows a lot of personal deep down emotions, which is a very good way to get good writing like this. Often time stories ...

This was a pretty good poem I have to say. And the part that I liked the most, was that it was short! Shhh, don't tell the other poets. Anyway, ...