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Hey there! Thanks for the review, you made some good points. I disagree that the first paragraph was switching tenses, but I did manage to find something that would make ...

Hey, thanks for the review! Organisation is written in British English, strangely enough that makes a difference compared to US English. I realise now that police shouldn't be caps, I ...

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Haha, its more got to do with your not believing that a woman would endanger herself for a stranger involved with dangerous people. It happens, that was all.

Hey Aly, thanks for the input definitely appreciated. My greatest struggle in writing seems to be punctuation so far, it hasn't quite sunk into habit. First of all, the point ...

Thanks for the input Eternity! I made this as a prologue because James isn't the main character, his brother will be. So this prologue isn't really necessary for the story ...

This is a stunning poem for multiple reasons, mostly being: -depth -tragedy -hope -but most of all character progression in one sentence "but now I know that I can trust ...

Unfortunately quite a melancholy poem of sorts which seems to lack any real progression or depth. Whether the narrator is depressed or simply grasping at insecurities to get some sort ...

Well written statement, you can only agree after reading and even possibly take initiative yourself. The stories written are each unique and help bring out the desperation of the message ...

This is exactly my mindset, I want to become a person to take initiative. I understand that I am not a main character and that I don't extraordinary abilities that ...