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Re: Old Poem: A Break Up Tale
I enjoyed it a lot to nice job.
Jun 1, 2005 -
Re: Lovin you
I liked this one.I think the words should be like this:dying and loving.Thats just me and the emotion at the end kinda takes away from the poem.
Jun 1, 2005 -
Re: The Chronicles of Jared, Prologue & Chapter I
Yeah well who cares.I thought it was amusing. Yeah agree with jack but i thought it was funny still laughing a little .Well gotta go.
May 31, 2005 -
Re: Into the starlight night
Yeah it sounds like a poem. I liked it a lot.
May 29, 2005 -
Re: A Different Kind of Goblin 2: The Classroom
You captured every little thing there was I liked this one a lot.its not good.....its Great!
May 28, 2005 -
Re: A Different Kind of Goblin 1: Crossing
That was very very good . Wait i mean great and now i move on to chapter2.
May 28, 2005 -
Re: Shave your legs
WHAT WE ALL TALKING ABOUT!HI COLTON ARE U SURE THIS ISN"T ON A LLAMA!?!?!?!?!?!?
May 26, 2005 -
Re: Realm
I like this and can't wait for the rest of the song.
May 26, 2005 -
Re: One Single Hate, Chapter 2
Wow this chapter was exciteing. I liked how you described the places and how you changed the color when they talked.
May 24, 2005 -
Re: Guardian of Heaven
Ok then it is settle i will start writing now......................A long time ago in a galaxy, far far away................. Episode 1. (j/k)
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Guardian of Heaven
SO is this a story I can start writing and people would be interested?
May 23, 2005 -
Re: Temptations
I liked this one are you serious!Your sister used to do that.I didn't know you had a sister!
May 19, 2005 -
Re: Freewrite--"the Break"
This does not suck!Remember what I taught u about being negotive ot urself!
May 18, 2005 -
Re: Freewrite--"the Break"
See u can still write.I like this one!
May 18, 2005 -
Re: THE TALE OF THE DRAGON JEWELS
I agree with bullet proof and Rei.I like it though.
May 18, 2005