Published May 26, 2005
I need someone to write a song about
a perfect life
I need someone to write a song about
a perfect love
Why is everything so incomplete?
Tell me it's a different way
When I get to sleep
Chorus:
Dreams come
When you need to wake up
From another world
Where everything you see
ANd everything you feel
won't be cold
I need someone to write a song about
a life that fails
I need someone to write a song about
a love that's never happy
I'm always hiding somewhere
A place where i can sleep
And forget everything
.......
Where did everybody go?
I'm finding you
I'm always finding you....
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thanks, guys!
Can't wait to make my next song.....
Cool- i like the firt four lines in each verse; sounds like it's about trying to find inspiration for songs. lol- it's really hard, i have a song like this in my notepad- all about how my life is so boring i can't think of anything to write... true story- my life is a snorefest.
Nice
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One prob: line five in the chorus has 'ANd' where it should just be 'And'
I like this and can't wait for the rest of the song.